What do you think of my poem?

very very gooooood! You know, I always wanted to write a poem like this, all in medieval times and what not. But I didn't think I could pull it off..like you did. Meter, it's rough in places...but In my poems...it rougher (that's not even a real word) But anyways, I loved it! It had me amused until the end. Please, post more it you will, and I'll be happy to read.